I am learning to yous vocabulary to help the readers get a photo in there heads. It is important to use interesting vocabulary because it gets the reader interested. Mrs Hill gave me a photo to write about. we had to write a describing sentence using interesting vocabulary. here are some interesting words that are in my story deserted, Airstrike, freedom and military base.
I am proud of my story because I put a lot of effort in it and have used describing words to explain the deserted town.
This is my writing I hope you like it.
The blown up town
In a cold deserted town I can see smoke from the fire bombs . everyone is dead my friends my family *sniff sniff* I no that I can bring this town to freedom no one can stop me now boom a bomb went off. let's go to the military base Boom to be continued.... Let's go to France. We are here time to get in plas. Fire!!!! Airstrike now tanks now mini guns now “the people let’s do it aah fire!!!!!!!!!” I think we did it holed fire.
I am proud of my story because I put a lot of effort in it and have used describing words to explain the deserted town.
This is my writing I hope you like it.
The blown up town
In a cold deserted town I can see smoke from the fire bombs . everyone is dead my friends my family *sniff sniff* I no that I can bring this town to freedom no one can stop me now boom a bomb went off. let's go to the military base Boom to be continued.... Let's go to France. We are here time to get in plas. Fire!!!! Airstrike now tanks now mini guns now “the people let’s do it aah fire!!!!!!!!!” I think we did it holed fire.
